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I would like waking up to mornings
with your body beside mine,
our legs intertwined
like roots which delve into the earth—
grounding, anchoring, strengthening—
binding two halves as one whole.

the morning breeze carrying soft murmurs
which slip from lovers' lips—
sibilant sighs of contentment
ebbing and flowing with the soughing wind,
that empyrean breath of the sky
whose shifts stir shadows into being
and play dawn's first light across gold-tinged skin.

nature's rhythms at work in the room;
inhales, exhales,
our heartbeats in sync,
steadfast and sure as the changes in the tide
and the metamorphosing moon.

I would like waking to you by my side,
your flesh as my flesh,
our lungs sharing breaths…

I would like waking to you.

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honestly, i haven't written anything in forever, but i felt a small strike of inspiration today as the result of current emotions, and wrote this.

please don't claim as your own. thanks!

plus it needs some work. my writing always needs work :D

also, i'm the world's worst at coming up with titles.

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:iconarthurcrow:
*ArthurCrow Jun 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Beautifully written... the lines flow and the mood is entrancing!
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~juliannecrea Jun 28, 2012  Student Photographer
thanks! :hug: glad you mentioned the mood, it's the main thing I tried to focus on :)
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*ArthurCrow Jun 28, 2012  Professional Writer
Well it's all a total success :heart:
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*Amberination Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Great!
So cute and complex, yet simple and I like it!
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~juliannecrea Jun 28, 2012  Student Photographer
thank you, it just sorta came to mind... :)
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